The genre crossing drama hiding twists beneath the light-hearted moments of humour.

 


Comments

Carole Hall

Thu, 13 Nov 2008 14:38:12

It was genuinely funny – not easy to do at all! It was very visual as well – I was seeing it in my minds eye as some kind of Romantic Comedy – would make a great film because of the excellent dialogue.

 

Pink Fox

Thu, 13 Nov 2008 14:40:26

Michael, this was a pleasure to read. Very polished, and readable. It was funny, light– hearted and just the right pace. I liked the dialogue driven way you write. It brings it alive. And what a way to kill off Elizabeth, totally unexpected.

 

Barrowcliffe G

Thu, 13 Nov 2008 14:42:42

I enjoyed the whole love triangle setup, but i was not prepared for the end of the chapter. How it ties into the world trade centre tragedy is unique and as far as i'm concerned original. You are either a twin yourself or have conducted research on twins. Either way it comes across as believeable.

 

Dan Holloway

Sat, 08 Aug 2009 11:06:05

This a good place to leave the links?
My personal website is
http://www.danholloway.wordpress.com

much more important are my other sites:

http://www.yearzerowriters.wordpress.com

http://www.freeeday.wordpress.com

Will go link from my site now. Can I interest you in participating in Free-e-day, btw?

 



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